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Why I never seem,
To get the respect,
For what I do, is beyond me...
Why we never seem,
To get the respect,
For what we do, is beyond us...
Why can't we ever,
Get some form of praise,
For what we share, or what we have?
Jealousy, anger,
Sadness, depression,
Brings us all down, and causes pain.

Bring the flame! The fires of opinion!
You think your feelings will change my way?
Your feelings won't hurt no matter what you say!
Fuel the flame! Throw me your mind, thoughts, and dreams!
You believe that you are better than me?
Than be constructive, and don't insult us!

You people take advantage of your judgement,
To bring us down, to make you superior.
Fucking critics, and your negative commentary,
Keep hurting me, it doesn't hurt me at all,
Honorless bastards make fools of their idols,
Just pretending, sitting in the throne of success.

Burn my mind! With fires of opinion!
You think your thoughts will make my day?
Your thoughts won't even do shit to me!
Throw your thoughts! Throw us all your criticism!
You say that you are better than me,
But you watch the movie without watching the movie!

Just because someone else has failed these task,
It doesn't mean that I can't achieve.
I can succeed!
You may have experienced failure in this scale before,
But some of us actually learn from you,
So we succeed!
In a world where icons don't trust their loyal subjects,
They don't know what they inspire.
For us to strive!
Degrade us, degrade the next generation to nothing,
We are the new millenium spawn.
We are alive!!

We are the ones that can accomplish the greater things,
Jealousy in your veins, believing we'll crumble society.
Thinking that we don't think, or learning that we don't learn.
Stereotypes don't apply to all, intellectuals left to rebuild.

Shield the flames! The fires of opinions!
You think we will crumble the dawns today?
We do what you couldn't do yesterday!
Growing flames! Throw gas to ignite the arguements!
We shall fill in where you left gaps,
We...shall...STRIVE!!

Nothing can bring me down,
Nothing can bring any of us down,
Nothing can bring us down,
Nothing can bring our love down,
Nothing can bring you down,
Nothing can bring our power down.

War of thoughts, battle of dreams,
Overcome by strength and absolute pride.
Bring it on, take us all down,
You critics need to watch your fucking movies...
A poem based on how negative opinions shouldn't hurt people, and that pride in yourself will be a great aspect in success. Just something that was inspired by the criticism I've gotten from people about my relationship with Cassie.
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Impbeast's avatar
rock fuckin ON!!!!!!
man im gonna apply this to them bastiches who flame me in
newgrounds and in here rock ONNNNNNNN