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We're dots to the superior microscope,
And with so many on our dirty paper,
We have no choice but to melt!
COERCE ME!!
HOLD ME DOWN,
SET ME AFLAME!!
Spin me around...
ULTIMATE KINETIC NIGHTMARE!
We have so many of them stored within,
And we're so inept to losing them.
Though with so much negativity conducted,
It wouldn't hurt to lose some of that space.
Positivity is when you lose it all.
Becoming molten idiot plasma.
Flip my channels and adjust my screen,
I'm sure I can work wonders for you.
I'm positive!
Now the nucleus is unstable,
And security abberated.
I'll be a thousand degrees forever!!
I'm excited and ready to mold...!
I'm changing and losing it all...
I am metal!!
Heh, I bet you expected this to be about everything exploding everywhere, didn'tcha? Well, no :XD:. Yeah, it's been a while since I've-a submitted any poetry, so how 'bout now? Especially since I'll still be taking a while in Carrick's to finish up #200. So, bon appetit :D.
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:icontiamat9:
Very offbeat and interesting. I really like the selection of words in the piece. It's creatively written.
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:iconkantqontrolmyself:
Why thank you dude ^^. It's great how you always have something nice to say :D. Really makes me feel awesome :w00t:!
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:icontiamat9:
You're welcome:). In all my DA comments on deviations, I try to be positive and focus on elements which appeal to me.
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:iconkantqontrolmyself:
Most generous dude! That's the way to do it :).
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:iconmorgzbaby:
strange boy. yet imaginative:)
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:iconmorgzbaby:
as you should!:giggle: keep it up darlin
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:iconkantqontrolmyself:
Thanks :D. And I like being both of those things ^^.
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